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易错点：改错 It’s a weather forecast of Harbin of tomorrow. There will be rainy in the afternoon. There will be strong wind. Harbin will have a strong wind. It will be rain in the morning. The temperature is 15℃ to 25℃ 精彩主体段：9.2 曹瀚元 You should care about his life. When he is in trouble, you should encourage him and help him overcome the problem. There’s a saying, “A friend indeed is a friend in need.” So you should help him when he’s in trouble in order to keep friendship. 精彩主体段：9.2 庞昆维 What’s more, in the new school, we may have some other friends. We can introduce them to our old friends. It’s also good for our friendship. 精彩主体段：9.2 郭瀚擎 Then care about them as much as possible When the weather gets cold, you can tell them to wear more clothes. 精彩主体段：9.2 周鸿宇 When a festival comes, call you old friends and hold a party. In this way, you can talk about the things that happened in each other’s new schools or the happy time we spent. 精彩主体段：9.1 王烁 You can keep some pictures of your friends. You can remember friends by these pictures. You can remind his or her smile, behavior and voice. 精彩主体段：9.1 李畅 Keep in touch with your friends more often. A telephone call can make your friends feel warm in their minds. And it can also make yourself happy. 三、打草稿： 结尾：总结话题，发出号召 精彩结尾：9.1 王龙 Now you should know how we can keep our friendship after we leave middle school. Friend ship is the most important part in our lives. So let’s learn to make our friendship more color- ful together! 三、拟提纲： 主体段：论据 2-3个 议论有理，层层深入 Doing housework makes us relaxed. … makes our parents happy. …can improve our abilities of life. 论据要深刻创新： It’s our duty to do housework because we’re family members. 四、修改草稿：词汇、句型、从句等 补充：字数 120—150 之间 精彩开头：9.2 王亮 Do you often help your parents with washing dishes? Do you like to wash your clothes by yourself? Some stu