利弊型作文错误分析及实例.ppt

英语六级作文评分方法 大学英语六级考试作文的目的旨在考核学生英语书面表达的能力。英语六级作文考试时间为30分钟，要求写出不少于120个词的短文。英语六级作文的出题方式有：命题作文，看图画或图表作文，根据所给文章（英文或中文）写出文章摘要或大意，给出关键词做文章。考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。对作文的要求是：切题，文理通顺，表达正确，意思连贯，无重大语言错误。 内容（content）是否切题 语篇铺排的差异---结构（structure）是否有逻辑性 段落发展方式——螺旋式与直线式　　 “汉语的篇章发展往往采用迂回的方式，不直截了当地阐述主题，而是以一种螺旋式的反复暗示逐步引出主题。”西方人习惯于抽象思维，因此英语语篇“在写作手法上就注重开宗明义，有的放矢，言简意赅，一语中的”。 语篇铺排的差异---结构（structure）是否有逻辑性 围绕主题绕圈子的写法在中国学生英语作文中并不少见。但这一段落在注重理性思考和逻辑性的西方人看来，给人的感觉是重点不明确，结构紊乱。　　　　 l????????? 利弊型的议论文 Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____. Just As a popular saying goes, every coin has two sides, __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______. To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___. 范文1 Advantages and Disadvantages of the InternetNowadays, the Internet is playing a more and more important role in people’s daily life. However, people’s opinions are still divided on this point. Those who are in favor of the Internet claim that it has a lot of advantages. Firstly, information searching is no longer a tough job with the help of all kinds of search engines. Secondly, we can contact friends or business partners via e-mails or software such as Internet Meeting and Yahoo Messenger. Last but not least, we can take part in groups or mailing lists to talk with friends of the same interest. Those who are opposed to the Internet hold that disadvantages are many. In the first place, the Internet costs considerable time, money and energy especially for those with less self-control. In the sec