SCI论文撰写体会-培训课件.ppt

四、讨论（Discussion） 几个要素： State what you found（阐明发现了什么） Outline the strengths and limitations of the study （强调该研究的亮点和不足） Discuss the relevance to current literature（讨论和目前文献的相关性） 合理的机理探讨，离不开示意图！一张图片胜过几段文字。 提出观点： 不是新观点：We confirm that…… 很自信的观点：We believe that…… 数据推断出一定的结论：Results indicate, infer, suggest, imply that…… 不完全肯定：We tentatively put forward (interrprete this to…)Or The results may be due to (caused by) attributed to resulted from……Or This is probably a consequence of……It seems that……can account for (interpret) this……Or It is posible that it stem from…… 自我批评： 研究的问题有点片面： It should be noted that this study has examined ……We concentrate (focus) on only……We have to point out that we do not……Some limitations of this study are…… 结论有些不足: The results do not imply……The results can not be used to determine(or be taken as evidence of)……Unfortunately, we can not determine this from this data……Our results are lack of…… Discussion中常用模式 连接词与逻辑： 常见的连接词: However, also, in addition, consequently, afterwards, moreover, Furthermore, further, although, unlike, in contrast, Similarly, Unfortunately, alternatively, parallel results, In order to, despite, For example, Compared with, other results, thus, therefore…… 按时间叙述：AA advocated it for the first time.接下来可用Then BB further demonstrated that. 再接下来，可用Afterwards, CC……如果还有，可用More recent studies by DD… 叙述两种观点: AA put forward that……In contrast, BB believe or Unlike AA, BB suggest or On the contrary (表明前面观点错误)，如果只表明两种观点对立，用in contrast BB…… 段落布局: Therefore, there are three aspects of this problem have to be addressed. The first question involves……The second problem relates to……The third aspect deals with……也可以直接用First, Second, Third, Finally…… Discussion中常用模式 对前人研究结果的不认同： Their studies may be more reasonable if they had……considered this situation. Their results could be better convinced if they…… Their conclusion may remain some uncertanties. Discussion中常用模式 五、