书面表达赢取策略.ppt

Part 1 书面表达常见错误 1.标点使用不准 2.时态语态错误 3.词形词性的混用 4.形容词·介词的混用 5.词义的混用 6.句式的错误 语态错误 Mary was dressing in white. The story was happened long long ago. We watched the train till it was disappeared. 词形错误 动词有过去式、过去分词、现在分词、单数第三人称形式。 In short, things have began to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. I was studiing in my room when the telephone rang. The driver drived so fast that the car knocked into a truck. The news spreaded quickly. 词性错误 1.及物动词与不及物动词混用 The teacher entered into the classroom. We all agreed Mary’s idea. It is our duty to serve for the people heart and soul. Mary married with John two years ago. 动词形容词介词的混用 Our PE teacher is ill. Who will instead of him? They all against your plan. I favourite English. 词义错误 The big fire spread through the building quickly, but luckily everybody tried to escape. We all persuaded Father to give up smoking, but he wouldn’t listen. The young man pointed to a policeman over there, explained and said, “He stopped us an hour ago.” 句式错误 My classmates suggest me to study hard. Welcome you to visit our school. There used to have two trees in the yard. 词汇层面 Adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的 clever →bright →wise →smart →intelligent 词汇层面 Adj.令人惊奇的 surprising →amazing →astonishing 词汇层面 1.越晚学到的词汇，越有水平。 2.越往后想到的词汇，用的人就越少，自然就越有水平。 人靠衣装，文靠词装 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜。 短语层面 电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。 1.Computers are very important in our life. 2.Computers play a very important role in our life. 3.computers are of great importance in our life. 句型层面 他昨天下午来的。 1.He came here yesterday afternoon. 2.He didn’t come here until yesterday afternoon. 3.Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here. 4.It was yesterday afternoon that he came here. 第五档（榜样的力量是无穷的！） 完全完成了试题规定的任务 ,覆盖所有的内容要点 。 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 。 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽量使用复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言应用能力 。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 。 完全达到了预期的写作目的 。 写作试题变化趋势 试题内容 1）内容贴近现实生活、贴近学生生活实际； 2）体现地方特色。 试题形式 1）多样化 2）读写结合（输入输出） 3）议论成分增加 试题提示 1）给了学生更大的表达空间， 2）要求学生去思考和审题（深入了解题意和要