(S)2015 南京市英语中考写作指导.ppt

中考英语写作指导 中考英语作文评分标准 一类（13-15分）：写出全部内容要点，语句流畅。基本无语法和词汇方面的错误。 二类（10-12分）：写出大部分要点，语句较流畅。有少量语法和词汇方面的错误。 三类（7-9分）：写出部分要点。语句基本通顺。有一些语法和词汇错误，有少量单词及标点错误。 四类（4-6分）：写出少量内容要点，语句不通顺。语法、词汇、单词拼写、标点错误较多。只有少量句子表达正确。 五类（1-3分）：基本上没有写出内容要点，语法、词汇、单词拼写错误较多。基本上没有通顺的句子。只写出一些单词，不知所云。 How to get high points in the exam? 1. 要点齐全； 2. 语法正确，段落清晰； 3. 书写工整，语言优美。 Follow the three steps: What to write? How to write? Make your article better. 1. 要点全； 2. 层次清； 3. 卷面净； 4. 行文美。 Tips：审题 Tips：提纲，时态、句型 【2010南京】书面表达（满分15分） 假如你是王林，你的美国朋友Daniel将来南京学习，他想了解所到中学附近的滨江图书馆（Binjiang Public Library）。请根据海报中的信息，给他发一封电子邮件，介绍滨江图书馆的情况及部分馆区的功能。 注意：1. 电子邮件中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。 3. 词数80左右。电子邮件的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Binjiang Public Library Over 900,000 books and 13,000 electronic journals Location: 18 Binjiang Road, Jianye District Open: 8:00 a.m. (Mon. — Fri.) 9:00 a.m. (Sat. Sun.) Closed: 5:00 a.m. (Mon. — Fri.) 8:00 a.m. (Sat. Sun.) Sections: Loan Desk(借书处)， Reading Room, Computing Room, Electronic Resources(资源)，Children’s Story Corner, Book Shop… Functions: ● borrow return books ● search for information on the Internet ● … Dear Daniel, I am pleased to know that you will come to Nanjing. 【2010南京】书面表达 Dear Daniel, I am pleased to know that you will come to Nanjing. Here’s some information about Binjiang Public Library. The library, located at 18 Binjiang Road, has over 900,000 books and 13,000 electronic journals. It is open from 8:00 a.m. to 5:00 p.m. on weekdays. On weekends it is open for 11hours. It is a good place for people to read and borrow books. There are different sections in the library. You can not only borrow and return books at Loan Desk, but also read newspapers and magazines in Reading Room. If you want to search for information on the Internet, you can go to Computing Room. You can also buy some new bo