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Student Use of Computers ① As is clearly shown in the chart, the number of hours students spent on computers increased from tow or four per week from 1990 to 1995. ②Especially, the number rose to about 14 hours per week in 2002. ③There are three factors leading to the change. ④To begin with, the price of computers is getting much lower than before so that many students can afford it. ⑤In addition, it is very convenient for us to study with the help of computers. ⑥For example, e-mail enable us to keep in touch with our teachers and friends.⑦ Last but not least, with the fast development of the modern society, a computer has become a must for many people. ⑧ To sum up, low price, convenience and wide use contribute to the increase in the use of computers. ⑨As for me, student use of computers is a double-edged sword. ⑩On the one hand, it is a good helper in searching for information, drawing pictures, etc.11 On the other hand, various computer games might distract students from their studies. 12 In brief, computers can serve us well if they are used in the right way. (193 words) 语言亮点点评 a) 句④中，afford: vt.支付得起，买得起。 b) 句⑥中，enable (sb. to do sth.): vt. 使……能做……，这个词用得很好 c) 句⑦中，a must:一种必需品。这个用法与something necessary 相比，更为贴切。 d) 句⑧中，contribute to:有助于……，是……的部分原因。 e) 句⑨ 中，a double-edged sword：双刃剑，如：Entering WTO is a double-edged sword to China. 对中国来说，加入世界贸易组织是一把双刃剑。 f) 句12中，serve (sb.) well： 很好地为……服务，不要写成serve for sb.。 ③ 常用句式 本节根据图表作文的特点和难点，提供了一些常用句式，以供参考。 a. 篇首 As is shown in the table/chart, the number of students enrolled dropped to 1,000 in 2006. 如表（图）所示，2006年录取学生数量降至1，000人。 As we can see from the chart/As is shown in the table/According to the table, the price of oil increased dramatically. 如图（表）所示，油价猛涨。 The figures in the chart reflect that/The statistics show that/The numbers in the graph reveal that people’s income has been increasing steadily. 图中数据显示，人们的收入保持稳步增长。 The graph suggests/shows/indicates/illustrates that there has been a sharp decline/rise in the po