观点类作文开心农场(HappyFarm).pptVIP

 How do you feel today? Happy or unhappy? What do you know about the pictures? They are all from a popular game Happy Farm. In the game, we can Plant trees/flowers; pick fruits; go fishing; raise some animals; even run a restaurant… How do you think about Happy Farm? 开心农场（Happy Farm）是一个比较热门的网络游戏，在一个属于你的农场里，你可以种植各种蔬菜和瓜果，还可以养家畜和宠物。偶尔，你可以采摘别人的果子，享受不劳而获的乐趣。请你结合以下观点谈谈自己的看法。 The steps of writing ( 二) 列要点、注短语。 (三)谴词造句 (三)谴词造句 (四)添加过渡词，句,连词成句，连句成段 (四)添加过渡词，句,连词成句，连句成段 it is bad for our health if we spend too much time playing the game and it is also a waste of time and energy. what we get from the game is unreal pleasure. picking others’ fruits may have a negative effect on the development of our personalities. (五)通读全文、检查修改。 1. 要点是否齐全； 2. 主谓结构是否在，是否一致； 3. 动词时态语态是否正确； 始终关注： 人称是否运用得当；首字母大小写；标点符号；卷面 A sample writing A sample writing it is bad for our health if we spend too much time playing the game and it is also a waste of time and energy. what we get from the game is unreal pleasure. picking others’ fruits may have a negative effect on the development of our personalities. Homework Copy this composition in exercise book after finish polishing. * * * Happy garden Happy farm 1.耗费时间和精力，不利于身体健康； 2.得到的是虚幻的快乐； 3.对个人品质的培养可能产生负面影响。 …… 1.放松心情，自娱自乐； 2.与网友联络感情； 3.对社会没有危害； …… 不赞同 赞同 注意：1.只能选择写一种观点，赞同或不赞同； 除提示外还可适当扩展内容； 2.词数：120 左右 人称 时态 文体 第一人称 一般现在时 议论文 (一)审试题，定基调。 1.耗费时间和精力，不利于身体健康； 2.得到的是虚幻的快乐； 3.对个人品质的培养可能产生负面影响。 …… 1.放松心情，自娱自乐； 2.与网友联络感情； 3.对社会没有危害； …… 不赞同 赞同 Be bad for our health 1.A waste of time and energy 2.unreal pleasure 3.Have a bad/ negative effect on …… 1.Relax ourselves; Entertain ourselves 2.Keep in touch with net friends; keep in contact with net friends; 3.Do no harm to … be not harmful to 1.Relax ourselves; Entertain ourselves; 2.Keep in touch with net friends; keep