汕头市2012-2013期末市统考作文(英语).ppt

2012-2013高中毕业班教学质量监测 小作文 你是英语校报的一名小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况： 短语 超过 不愿意做…… 与……分享 做……是非常必要的 对……是十分有利 Last weekend, I was very lucky to interview Kelly Lam, a professor of psychology, talking about the Chinese students’ opinion on sharing feelings. In China, more than 30% of the students are unwilling to share their feelings no matter when they are delighted or worried. What’s more, our education doesn’t let children know the importance of sharing. Professor Lam believes that we live in a time in which sharing feelings is so necessary. Therefore, students should learn how to share their feeling ,which is beneficial to their growth in the future. 2012-2013高中毕业班教学质量监测 大作文 30字总结 A carpenter felt regretful when he knew the last house he had built impatiently was a gift for his retirement, which reminds us that we should build our life wisely. 【答案要点】 1. 退休前没有认真完成最后一份工作 2. 最后发现所造的房子是给自己的礼物 3. 感到后悔 4. 要明智对待生活（点题） 【出现的问题】 30字总结写得过于详细，没有体现概括。 你觉得木匠的做法明智吗？ It is absolutely unwise of the carpenter to end up his career in this way. Treating his last job carelessly made him lose not only a good house but also his fame as an outstanding house builder. 明确点明作者的观点，明智还是不明智。 简要讲明所述观点的原因。 【出现的问题】 过于简单的写yes / no, 阐述观点的原因生搬硬套原文句子 能用木匠的态度对待什么吗？为什么？ There is no doubt that we shouldnt treat our life as the carpenter did. A saying goes,How you treat life, and how life treats you! If we are unwilling to face or deal with our life correctly, it will reward us nothing. 引用俚语，更充分形象的点明观点。 【出现的问题】 滥用例子，而且还是不切题的例子。 我们应如何明智对待生活？ Then how can we build our life wisely? its fairly simple. The only answer is to be serious. Only when you treat all the matters happening in your life seriously can you learn and gain a lot, which is beneficial as well as wise. 运用设问句巧妙链接了上下两段，并用倒装句和非限制性定语从句来结尾，强有力地表明自己明智对待生活的态度和方式。 * (1)我们所生活的这个时代，学会分享感受是非常必要的； (2)应该学会如何分享感受，对未来的成长十分有利。 专家观点： (1)无论是快乐或者忧愁，超过30%的学生都不愿意和其他人分享； (2)我们的教育没有让孩子知道分享的重要性。 基本信息： 中国学生关于分享感受的看法 主题： 心理学教授Kelly Lam 对象： 上周末 时间： ① ② ③ ④ ⑤ more than/ over