初中作文竞赛辅导.ppt

“一审”即审题。 “二写”即列提纲。 “三连”即连句成篇。 “四改”即修改润色全文。 高分作文四要素 １．漂亮的书写，整洁的卷面 ２．高级的词汇与句型 ３．行文流畅（连接词的使用） ４．思想具体到位，不空洞 平庸到精彩三步曲 对 新 活 平庸到精彩第一步 对 平庸到精彩第二步 新 新 新 平庸到精彩第三步 活 My English can’t be better without you. It’s high time that I should say thank you. No sooner had I talked to others than my face turned red. As an old saying goes, “one tree can’t make a forest.” Everyone is supposed to have a friend. We need love to grow and the world also needs love to become better. 正文：语言简洁，层次分明 长句短句交叉使用最好。 基础一般的同学要尽量使用简单句，文章算不上完美，但很实用。 把握要点，层次清晰。 注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，注意适当使用连词， 例如：and ,so ,or, but, become等等。 提高写作的方法 1. 仿写 2、扩写 3. 造句 扩写 The girl likes reading. The pretty girl likes reading novels. The pretty girl likes reading novels carefully. The pretty girl who I talked to just now likes reading novels carefully. 丰富的句式 强调句 It’s her love that makes me have confidence; it’s her love that…. 九(9) 赵冲霄 It’s you who give a hand to me and help me overcome any difficulties. 九(12) 施露倩 宾语从句 Betty is my best friend. I love her not because of who she is, but because of who I am when I am with her. 九(7) 舒晨、卢奕 定语从句 The most important point we should pay attention to is friendship. 九(11) 叶小菲 Your love is like sunshine that makes me feel warm. 九(10) 章庆玲 I’m really thankful to my mother who gives me lots of love that nobody else can give. 九(6) 王驰 主语从句+状语从句 It’s true that a mother’s love never changes. Even though everyone leaves, our mothers are still around us. 九(8) 徐露露 九（2） 王泽虎 双重否定 九（11） 陈金顺 徐叶哲 虚拟语气 九（2） 鲍家晟 倒装 九（2） 鲍家晟 谚语俗语 To?the?world?you?may?be?one?person,? but?to?one?person?you?may?be?the?world.?? 九（7） 李佳卿 九（8）蒋其峻、王璐卿 九（11） 祝翊凡 Good beginning Mother is thought to be one of the greatest people in the world. And I’m so lucky that I have a good mother. 九（9） 金江南 一、恰当的连接 三、丰富的句式 二、高级的词汇 高分作文 俗语/谚语/名人名言 各种从句 强调句 分词短语作主语/定语/状语 倒装 插入语 It作形式主语/宾语 With的复合结构 漂亮完美的卷面 是保证！ 什么样的作文能得高分？ 1．书写非常清楚，几乎没有涂改； 2．用词丰富，句式多样； 3．用词尽量与别人不一样，有自己特点； 4．语言表达流畅，观点有说服力；