第五次写作课：社会类.ppt

Key points :;;;;铁成文;;历年环保类文章统计;2012年广东省中山市;BBC World Have Your Say: “ Life in China” 　　　Every day, BBC News on TV, radio and online brings you stories from across the world. But what we want to hear are the stories that matter to you. 　　　Have got a story about life in China today? If you do, please put your stories here. I like traveling and I have traveled a lot around China. During the trip, I often find that a number of Chinese don’t have good public manners(举止). They always loudly on the phone and smoke everywhere. The worst is that they often break the rules in public. For example, when I traveled in Hong Kong in January this year, I saw a kid eating noodles on the underground , which is against the rules. However, the kid’s mother didn’t think he did wrong. Can you believe it? Let’s improve our public manners. (Mike, Shenzhen) I am a 14-year-old boy from a poor village in Fuyang , Anhui Province. Like many other left-behind children(留守儿童)in China, l live with my grandparents now. my father went to work inn Shanghai several years ago. Last year, my mother went there to care for him because his health is not as good as before. They tell me to listen to my grandparents and call me about twice a month to ask about my study. I really miss my parents and I hope I can afford to go to school in Shanghai. I think every child needs parents’ love and care. (Wu Peigen, Anhui Province);B） 书面表达（本题15分）根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。 假如你是一名叫李明（Li Ming）的中学生，看了上述故事后，你想表达自己的看法。 请你给栏目编辑写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 你对其中的哪个故事感兴趣？原因是什么？ 你对这个故事所提及的现象的看法。 就该现象提出至少两条解决问题的建议。 作文要求： 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。 语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。 Dear Editor, I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today, ______________ Yours, Li Ming;审;审;析;析;对哪个感兴趣？感兴趣的原因;对该现象的看法;解决建议（至少两条）;构;构;篇章结构;信：开头 对哪个感兴趣？感??趣的原因 对该现象的看法：抨击 解决建议（至少两条） 信：结尾;写;Dear Editor, I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today, ________________ (已经给出);对哪