第五节英语写作中 句子结构常见错误.ppt

* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * 实用英语写作 外语教研室 王松 V. Sentence Structure Problems 句子结构中最常见的错误： 1. Sentence Fragments 2. Run-on Sentences 3. Misplaced Modifiers 4. Dangling Modifiers 1. Sentence Fragments 残缺句就是指不能独立成句的句子片断。 Wondering what his son was going to do. Mr. Smith had been wondering what his son was going to do. 1. Sentence Fragments Some errors in writing are serious. For example, fragments and run-on sentences. Some errors in writing are serious, for example, fragments and run-on sentences. OR: Some errors in writing are serious, among which are fragments and run-on sentences. 1. Sentence Fragments 改写残缺句主要有以下两种方法： 1.将句中用的句号变成逗号，或把分隔开的短语或从句同它所属的句子合并成一个能表达完整意思的句子。 Since there is a lack of interest. There is a great lack of information. Since there is a lack of interest, there is a great lack of information. 1. Sentence Fragments You should make a determined effort to avoid sentence fragments. Because they are considered serious mistakes in writing. You should make a determined effort to avoid sentence fragments because they are considered serious mistakes in writing. 1. Sentence Fragments I look forward to holidays. For example, Thanksgiving and Christmas. I look forward to holidays, for example, Thanksgiving and Christmas. 1. Sentence Fragments 改写残缺句主要有以下两种方法： 2. 把残缺句扩展到主句中，或通过添加或减少某些成分，把残缺改写为独立、完整的句子。 I am interested only in the properties of citrus fruit (柑橘类的水果 ). Such as lemons, oranges, and grapefruit. I am interested only in the properties of citrus fruit. Examples are lemons, oranges, and grapefruit. 1. Sentence Fragments Having no money and being lonely in the big city. Having no money and being lonely in the big city, the old woman committed suicide. It was difficult to decide, which choice to make. To return to school or to accept the job. It was difficult to decide whether to return to school or to accept the job. 2. Run-on Sentences 接排句就是两个或更多的句子混合交织在一起，而没有正确的标点符号或句子连接词表明它们之前关系的