谚语名言类作文.pptVIP

谚语型作文的写作要点 一 认真研读要求 开篇引出谚语，要求考生对谚语做适当的诠释，并举例论证，肯定并证明谚语的合理性。 谚语式作文常用开头 The famous saying”-----” is widely accepted by all of us. The saying tells us that ----. The well-known proverb “---” has been accepted by us. It tells us that ----. There is a famous saying “---” , which means that ------ When we talk of the famous proverb----, we shouldn’t simply label it as right or wrong, but explore it in depth. It’s well-known to all that -----. This self-evident proverb means -----. 举例阐述部分 第二或第三段举出实例，详细阐述，证明此谚语的合理性，可以个例和范例相结合。 结尾部分 对例证进行简单补充，用以证明谚语的广泛性，总结全文或提出建议。 结尾部分应当简短有力，体现文章的层次感。 请你以谚语“Haste makes Waste 为题，按下列要求用英语写一篇短文。 谈谈你的理解与看法； 举例说明理由。 注意：1. 词数：100-120词； 2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 主要问题 未能正确理解谚语含义 所举例子不能证明谚语的正确性； 使用直接引语，变成对话形式； 语法错误层出不穷，句子逻辑不通； 1. Many hands make light work. 2. Actions speak louder than words. 3. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 4. Beauty is only skin-deep. 5. All roads lead to Rome.6. Rome was not built in a day.7. No pains, no gains.8. A good beginning is half done. 9. Heroes think alike. 10.Failure is the mother of success. 11. Every bean has its black.12.A man can be destroyed but not defeated. 13. Genius is nothing but labor and diligence. 14. Good medicine for health tastes bitter to the mouth. 15. The early bird catches the worm. 16. Where there is a will.there is a way. 17. Light come,light go. 18.A fall in the pit,a gain in your wit. 19.A young idler,an old beggar. 20. Behind the mountains,there are people to be found. 21. East or west,home is the best. 22. One swallow cannot make a summer.  审题到位了，为何仍然失分过多？ 拼写错误比比皆是，基本词汇很不扎实； 句子主要成分残缺，不考虑衔接过渡； 主谓明显不一致，没有回头检查句子结构的习惯； 时态语态混乱，不考虑表达的合理性； 词汇贫乏，用词不当，词不达意； 上下文指代不清，思路不清，没有层次； 直接引语或汉语式表达，语义不通； 书写潦草，看到就写，边写边改，随意增删，卷面不整洁 适用于“欲速则不达”的实例 有些人想快速致富，不重质量或实效； 父母给孩子报各种辅导班，兴趣班； 急功近利的工程建设； 语言、音乐或某门技能的学习； 拔苗助长； 减肥； 发展经济和保护环境； 快速驾驶； As we all know, there is an old saying, “Haste makes Waste”. It means if people are eager to finish the task in a hurry, the resu