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如何拓展读写任务要点？ 读写任务分为两部分，第一部分为摘要，第二部分要求考生根据要求写120词的作文，但这一部分试卷却反映出来考生们思路混乱，或者说根本没有任何头绪，特别是一些模糊要点，如读了文章后的感受；谈谈××的重要性等。考生们总是想一句写一句，东拉西扯，写着写着恐怕连他自己都觉得好笑，或是几句话就写得山穷水尽了，想写长也无能为力。那么读写任务第二部分应该怎样做才能吸引改卷老师的眼球呢？ 以往年广州一模读写任务为例，要求以约120个词用英语给你妈妈回信，内容包括：（1）你读信后的感受；（2）你是否赞成你妈妈的观点，并陈述理由；（3）你对妈妈的承诺。试看一个考生的第一个要点是怎样写的： 再看另一位考生的表达： 为使读写任务第二部分能取得高分,现就如何拓展主题句, 组织写作思路,令到自己有话说，并且是说的有条理来进行一些探讨: 如（1）：谈论个人对网上购物的看法。 On one hand, online shopping has its advantages. Firstly, it is much cheaper. As far as I’m concerned, online stores offer lower prices to the customers and some don’t charge delivery fee if we buy more than one. Secondly, it is more convenient as customers needn’t walk store after store for what they like. And it’s easier for them to compare products online. On the other hand… 如（2）谈论“互联网对人们生活带来的影响” (主题句）The Internet plays a vital role in our daily life. （拓展句）It not only provides people with amounts of latest information, but also changes the way people communicate with each other. Besides, the Internet enables people to go shopping at home easily and conveniently. 如：（1） 11年广州一模要求就“诚信的重要性”的主题发表看法，要点（1）你读后的感受； （主题句-感受）After reading the story ,I feel it is important to be honest. (拓展句)It’s obvious that an honest person will definitely win the respect from others, which is of great importance in our study and daily life, let it alone in the business world. However, a dishonest person will lose his fame and trust from others sooner or later. No matter how intelligent he is, dishonesty will ruin his future. 如(1)：就“如何减少交通事故”的主题谈论人们应该如何避免交通事故 What can we do to avoid traffic accidents? ① As to drivers: a) keep their emotions under control; b) respect others ② As to walkers/pedestrians and cyclists: a) strictly obey the traffic rules; b) value their own lives 考题中，我们经常遇到举事例的要点，虽然同学们都能将思路展开，把故事的经过表述清楚，但往住缺乏生动性，因此，同学们可有意识地多一些人物的心理活动的描写及情感态度表达，不仅能增添字数，而且能达到锦上添花的效果，如： So upset was I