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组成短文： June 3,2005 Dear editor, Recently, our class have a heated discussion about whether the Benjing Zoo should be moved out of the city. Some of my classmates are in favor of the move. They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams. They also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs. However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Benjing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years and is wellknown at home and abroad. So it should remain where it is. What’s more, moving will cause the death of some animals. To move or not, this is a big decision, which has to be made by people in Benjing. Yours truly, LiHua … June 3,2005 Dear editor, Recently, our class have a heated discussion about whether the Benjing Zoo should be moved out of the city. Some of my classmates are in favor of the move. They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams. They also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs. However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Benjing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years and is wellknown at home and abroad. So it should remain where it is. What’s more, moving will cause the death of some animals. To move or not, this is a big decision, which has to be made by people in Benjing. Yours truly, Li Hua 经全国中小学教材审定委员会2004年审查通过 全日制普通高级中学教科书