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Consultation Time!(专家会诊) Instruction: The passage above is just like a patient who has this kind of problem or another. Some problems are serious, while some others are very common. You are all experts today. By having a consultation(会诊), you will find out the problems and then provide proper treatment for this special patient. What are the problems with “the patient”? 1.the most serious problem is: 2. Some minor problems such as tones, ending, etc. Something is missing! The significance of a class uniform: Give students a sense of belonging; Strengthen the bond among class members; Promote the friendship among students; Make students proud of their own class; What is logo? The logo of a company or organization is the special design or way of writing its name that it puts on all its products, notepaper, or advertisements. Treatment Time! Dear committee, 　　 In response to the Class Culture Festival held by the school, our class have come up with the idea of designing a class uniform. In our opinion, a class uniform should be unique and special. It can give us a strong sense of belonging. Besides, it can strengthen the bond among us. Having a picture of all the students in our class printed on our class uniform is a very good idea. Besides, the logo “No. 1” should be included as well. Although it is very simple, “No. 1” is more powerful, neat and distinguishable than you may think. It not only tells others we come from class one, but it also conveys our ambition to become the first either in study or in life. The main color should be red, for it best represents our enthusiasm and energy. We hope you will consider our idea. ? Yours truly Li Yue Cosmetic Surgery Time! Use transition phrases or sentences Adopt varied sentence structures Apply advanced words and p