CET4作文概要1.ppt

3. Abstract words 【原】It is very important for the public to acquire knowledge on Sinology. Because it stands for Chinese civilization with more than 5000 years and promoting Sinology can help to build a harmonious society. 【改】It is of vital significance for the public to acquire knowledge on Sinology. For one thing, it stands for Chinese civilization with more than 5000 years. For another, the promotion of Sinology can contribute to a harmonious society. 【原】A developing country such as China should consider education first. 【改1】In a developing country such as China, education should be thought of first. 【改2】In a developing country such as China, education should be the top priority.  【原】Long time of gazing at the screen will do harm to our eyes. 【改】Long time of exposure to the screen will do harm to our eyes. It’s well known that…. A popular/prevalent belief is that… 4.Phrases 【原】Unfortunately, it has caused some problems never thought of. 【改】Unfortunately, it has given rise to some unexpected problems. 【原】By no mean can we ignore the importance of mental health. 【改】 By no mean can we lose sight of the importance of mental health.. 【原】I did not consider that factor carefully. 【改1】I did not take that factor into careful consideration/account. 【改2】 I fail to take that factor into careful consideration. 【改3】That factor did not be taken into careful consideration.  Exercise: 1. In order to live a good life, it is becoming more and more important for people to ?learn knowledge well. 2. Smoking has bad influence on children. 3. have positive effects 对比论证 Some people hold the view that names may contribute to their fame or fortune; some others even maintain that the mental health and physical fitness will be influenced or even determined by their names. On the contrary, a great many people insist that name is just a symbol, with little significance. They even go so far as listing some famous figures with common names. In recent years,