高中英语写作指导2.pptxVIP

高中英语书面表达（2）;revision;复合句;判断下面句子属于哪种复合句;练习: 改正下面句子, 使之成为正确的一句话;It was raining hard, they could not work in the field. ;The professor walked into the classroom, he carried a bag of books with him. ;--学会运用复合句和非谓语动词;① Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. ② The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games. ③ It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic. ④ However, not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting. ⑤ With the sport becoming more and more popular, it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.;写作中复合句常见的错误;2.以逗号代替句号,把两个简单句当成一个句子;4.过多地使用并列句组合信息;学会运用复合句和非谓语动词;不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时??汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。;① Not everyone is good at learning English.;① Not everyone is good at learning English.;学会使用复合句和非谓语动词;第一句（两个信息点）： 1. 学生作文中出现很多错别字 2.（他们）上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。;1. They have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters; 连接两句话： The reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students’ composition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line. Moreover, they have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters.;; Exchange and discuss your partner’s composition, then give each other a score according to the following criteria.;;句子的连贯;连贯性的要求是：句子前后之间要有照应，有衔接，思想的表达应该有序，清楚．句子与句子之间的过渡要符合逻辑，不能造成歧义或矛盾．;写作训练