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5. Give your comments on the following letters: Dear Gentlemen: The editing work on your recent edition of ___ Journal indicates that your editing department needs more qualified editors. I am pleased to send you a sample work of mine, along with my resume. I look forward to working with you. Yours truly. 此信说人家的编辑部门需要更多合格的编辑，就暗含现有人员不够好的味道。 Revised letter: Dear Gentlemen: Congratulations on your recent edition of ___ Journal. It’s one of the finest pieces I’ve seen. Creative work of this caliber deserves talented editors. I have enclosed a sample work of mine as well as my resume. Your editing department will be delighted with some additional help from the person with my experience. If you want more information, please call me. It would be a pleasure to work with you. Yours truly. As per your request by letter of August 15th, we are enclosing herewith six copies of reprints of the paper, “Effect of Fuel Ethanol on Subsurface Microorganisms,” for your perusal. Trusting you will find them useful. yours very truly, 上面的信使用太多陈词滥调的字眼，太过拘泥于形式，应改为亲切自然的口语化写法。 Revised letter: Thanks for your letter of August 15. It’s a pleasure to send you six reprints of “Effect of Fuel Ethanol on Subsurface Microorganism”. We hope you’ll find them interesting and useful, Mr. ___ . Sincerely yours, Thank you for your interest in “sources and Controls of Sulphur Export in North Taiwan.” The cost of 50 reprints would be five dollars each. It would be a pleasure to serve you. 这封洽询信简短而且中肯扼要，将问题回答得令人满意。 Dear Sir: In referring to your letter of April 23, as your letter was miss-addressed we did not receive your letter as promptly as we should have. As your letter of the above date was not signed by you, we do not feel that we