如何使英语句子优美.ppt

　　　　 6.这本书是如此的有趣，以致于我读了一遍又一遍。 1)________________________________ 2)________________________________ 3)_________________________________ 4)________________________________ 7.The teacher took a book in his hand and came into the classroom. = The teacher came into the classroom, ____ ____ ____ ____ ____ ____ ． 　(用with的复合结构) ＝ The teacher came into the classroom, _____ ______ _____. （用独立结构） In the past, the school here was very small ⑤. ⑥ Now it has been rebuilt. ⑦ The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys ⑧. It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. ⑨ They enjoy free education in it. ⑩ Thank you. In the past, the school here was very small ⑤ and most children couldn’t afford to go to school. ⑥ But now it has been rebuilt ⑦ and ⑧ which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. ⑨ What’s more, they enjoy free education. ⑩ May you enjoy your stay here the newly built teaching building / May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you. Rencently there has been a heated discussion on whether we should continue to use the dragon as China’s symbol. Opinions vary from person to person; some people claim that the dragon is no longer a suitable symbol for China. Whereas others don’t think so. Is the dragon a suitable symbol for China Those who hold the former view think that it shouldnt be the symbol of china. For one thing ,in western countries,the dragon is an evil animal.It often kills good people. For another, they think the image of a dragon may lead westners to have a negative opinions of China. * 如何使句子优美 专题复习：书面表达训练之一 词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂） 1.覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 4. 语言得体 要点全 连接词 如何算是一篇好文章？ 语言地道规范 句式多变化 作文更优美 怎样用不同的表达方式表示相同的意义 怎样通过对句子结构的变化,使文章显得更加丰富多彩 怎样运用高级词汇，给文章增加亮点 怎样使句式多变语言优美呢？ 1.What surprised me most was that he didnt know me at all. → = surprised