实用写作技巧课件.pptVIP

一、破句 所谓破句，就是把不成句子的一组词当成句子来对待。破句在学生的习作中大量存在。 l) I have a meeting with my boss . During my lunch break on Thursday . 2)I am going to the airport .To meet my best friend there . 3) We have everything we need . Sleeping bag , tent and warm clothes . 二、串句 就是错误地把两个或多个本来完整的句子用逗号或不作任何标点符号串在一起 ,让独立完整的句子不能独立起来 ,没有考虑句子之间的关系 ,造成结构上的错误。  l ) Tom is a terrible soccer coach , he cares more about winning than he does about the children he manages .  2 ) Benny decided to quit smoking , it was making him dizzy(晕眩的) and lightheaded（头晕眼花的） 三、修饰语错置l ) The supervisor(主管人) told m