撰写临床SCI论文实例剖析10Oct2015.pptVIP

Key point 1 迄今为止，截至到 Until, till, so far, thus far, up to now H. pylori was not isolated until 1982. (till is usually not used in formal scientific articles). The exact mechanisms how H. pylori leads to gastric carcinoma have not been elucidated so far (thus far, up to now). The exact mechanisms how H. pylori leads to gastric carcinoma were not elucidated until now. Exercise 14 Discussion - What is the difference? * 能够Able to, capable of, Ability to, capacity of H. pylori is able to survive/capable of surviving in the human stomach. H. pylori has ability to survive/capacity of surviving in the human stomach. * 文稿Manuscript, article, paper The final version of this manuscript has been submitted to Nature. The manuscript/article/paper submitted to Nature has been accepted. The article/paper published in Nature has been cited 500 times. Exercise 15 Discussion- What is the difference? * 定语从句Which, that H. pylori, which was first isolated by Marshall in 1982, has been recognized to be the major cause of peptic ulcer disease. The H. pylori strains that possess a vacuolating cytotoxin (i.e. VacA) are associated with gastric carcinoma. Exercise 16 Discussion – What is the difference? * 复杂从句 常见错误 - 辅句排前, 主句排后 目的 In order to reveal the molecular mechanisms how H. pylori causes gastric cancer and to identify the potential target for gene therapy, we carried out the present study. 时间、地点、环境 At baseline, 2, 4 and 8 weeks after the treatment, patients were followed up. During 3-5August 2012, we participated in a workshop on how to write SCI articles. In clinical practice, Chinese physicians usually prescribe Chinese patent medicine. * 条件 At 37oC, in an incubator with 5% CO2, the cells were cultured in the Dulbeccos Modified Eagles medium. 根据 According to a method previously described by Wang et al. (1), we performed the RT-PCR. Based on previous published data on the incidence of gastric cancer in the different continents (1), we estimated the worldwide profile. 复