大学英语b作文写作范文(2014年10月整理).doc

写英语作文的时候，只要做到以下几点，可以避免丢分： 　　1．不要跑题，要紧紧围绕所给命题，尤其在开头要点题，结尾要扣题。 　　2．尽量写完整的句子，表达一个完整的意思。 　　3．尽量使用关联词，承接词等使文章连贯，逻辑合理。 4．避免使用自己不熟悉的大词，尽量使用自己熟知的简单的词语准确表达思想； 　　5．尽量少犯语法错误。 6．字数尽量在规定的范围内。 My English Teacher (我的英语老师) / My Teacher in High School (我的高中老师) My Teacher / An Unforgetable Teacher (我的老师 / 难忘的老师) My English teacher (in high school) is Miss Huang. She is a beautiful lady. There is always a smile on her face. Miss Huang likes singing. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is a good dancer, too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing. Miss Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. Her favorite color is blue, because blue is the color of the sky and the sea. She is my favorite teacher. Our classmates all like her very much. My Teacher in High School（参考范文） My English teacher in high school is Miss Huang, who is a beautiful lady. Her favorite color is blue because blue is the color of the sky and the sea. Whenever you meet her, there is always a smile on her face. We all regarded Miss Huang as a responsible teacher. She always prepared her lectures seriously, so her lectures were both interesting and instructive. She corrected our homework carefully and wrote some remarks if we made some mistakes. When we made a little progress, she was as happy as we were. Miss Huang is our good teacher as well as a helpful friend. Both my classmates and I like her very much. My Teacher in High School（满分作文） My English teacher in high school is Mr. Li, who is an ordinary-looking, grey-haired man wearing a pair of glasses. At that time, he was about fifty and looked rather thin. One day, after the middle-term English test, we began to complain in our dormitory. He was too strict with us, we thought. On that day, he seemed very disappointed and announced the names of the students who had failed in the test. Most of them felt humiliated and depressed. But my opinion of Mr. Li soon changed. One