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英语写作专题讲座 主讲人：胡卫卫 E-mail:hwwhb@163.com 佳作欣赏 After I get up in the morning, I like to take a walk. It was raining one day, but not heavily. Drop by drop, it fell on my head. I was in high spirits. Along the path, there were many little yellow flowers 佳作欣赏 which put their heads up to absorb their drinks. They had been completely washed. They appeared fresh and lively. Whenever I was in these surroundings, I would forget all my troubles. Many people do not like raining. 佳作欣赏 They think the rain is troublesome. But I don’t. we keep breathing unclean air in the city. However, when it rains, we are able to taste the fresh air, which is good to our health. 佳作欣赏 Walking in the rain is an enjoyment to me. I do not know why, but I just like it. 评析：这是一片清丽的记叙文。夹杂着描写和议论，充满生活情趣，也崇尚了人和环境和谐一致的美好意向。用词浅易通俗、文笔朴实无 佳作欣赏 华，但却很动人。全文由三个段落组成。第一段主题段（第一句为主题句），即作者喜欢早晨散步；中间一段描写具体的一次雨中散步，怡然自得，用以开拓这一主题；最后第三段为结论段，几呼应主题散步，又为全文雨中散步之妙趣总结。 I.文章和段落 1/1。英文书面表达题要求写150字左右的文章，虽然较短，但是一般宜分成三段，包括引言段、扩展段和结尾段，让人读来脉络清晰。由于不懂得分段而一直从头写到底，往往让阅卷人读起来不舒畅，难免会影响分数。文章的分段是为了启承展合，是写好文章的要领之一。 1/2。文章的开头很重要。英语作文强调开宗明义在先，主张较早点出主题，表明作者的观点。写好一段文字，必须构思在先，其中通常含有一个段落主题句，表明段落中心思想。同时会有一至若干句子，提出实例或阐述，用以支持这一主题，称之为支撑句或扩展句。文章的第一段又统领全篇文章，成为主题段。 1/3。文章段落的主题句通常在段首，有时在段落中间，或段落末尾。作者立了主题句后，能明确该写什么，不该写什么，也让读者能够立刻知道段落或文章要讲的是什么。 1/4。一篇完整的文章由相关的段落组成，一般包括起引导作用的位于文章开首的引言段、作为全文主体的中间段，以及文章末了的结尾段。各段落环绕一个中心思想结构组合，已达到句子衔接、段落贯通、前后呼应、突出主题，让读者得到完整感受的目的。 1/5。目前英文的书面表达对字数要求较少，因此，第一段往往点名主题即可，除了主题句外可能没有支撑句；第二段或称中间段，成为开拓主体的部分，其中有支撑主题的句子，包括阐述、举例或议论、是文章的主体；第三段也即最后一段，则作为结论段，内容可以是总结、评论或重复主题，限于短文篇幅，通常只能一两句而已。 II.主题句在段首、段中、段尾的三类情况 2/1. One of the most urgent problems disturbing the Americans is the problem of crime. The number of crimes of violence has been steadily rising. Every year more cars are stolen; more stores and homes are robbed. In every city there are streets on which citizens dare not walk or public parks they dare not enter after dark. Even schools have witnessed scenes of violence. 2/2. So far, the robot seems to be best at cleaning the house. But it i