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Student Compositions by Stars等2则Student Compositions by Stars Not long ago,ten student compositions written by stars were posted on a blog simultaneously. Besides the one by Zhao Wei which had been posted elsewhere before,we can also find the immature compositions by artists such as Li Yuchun,Huang Xiaoming,He Jiong,and writers like Han Han. Among them are Li Yuchun?s three compositions:That Girl,I do Not Want to Grow Up,and We Belong to the Summer,which were all written when she was a high school student. The first one,which was written while she was a junior,describes in the third person what she was like at that time: “She is rather humorous and fond of making jokes. She does some writing which nobody can understand... She tends to laugh without restraint,to cry without pretence,just like a child,to argue with a desire to win,and to talk freely with exaggeration.”Her writing skill became more sophisticated in We Belong to the Summer,in which she used beautiful parallel constructions in every paragraph,such as: “Go to the boundless open country and chase each other like vigorous tigers! .... Go to a noisy skating rink and skate like colorful butterflies! ... Go to a ski run on a snow-covered high mountain and do a thrilling bungee jump like a robust eagle!”About this,not a few netizens have remarked,“I couldn?t write such a good composition as a senior high school student. ” Another one was Han Han?s Winter,which was written when he was in second grade. At that time,his writing was very childish and there were many ungrammatical sentences in it. After describing a snowball fight,he concluded:“I must beat them in the future and let them know how strong I am.” From these words,we can see that he is not a person to admit defeat. The composition also shows that he is very careful in handwriting. Of the ten compositions,the one written by He Jiong about his impression of a book when he was a senior high school student is the most insightful. The article beg