Lecture 010 Task 2 评分标准及常用套句.docVIP

Writing Task 2 Writing Task 2Composing 雅思写作样卷评析 Task2 评分标准 评分标准解读：【Page 281】 Task Response 任务完成情况 Cohesion and Coherence 连贯与衔接 Lexical Resources 词汇资源 雅思写作常用替换词汇 AWL词汇表 Grammatical Range and Accuracy 语法使用范围及准确性 Task response 要求 观点明确，并有效扩展支撑 论及反面观点 辩证思维 论证集中 “4) Keep your ideas focused” “Payment is the only measurement of decent job. Do you agree or disagree?” I tend to disagree with the opinion. Payment is one of the measurements. Payment should never be the only measurement. Decent job should provide broad space for personal development. Space for personal development is another decisive element for decent job. 雅思写作样卷评析[Page 3] 样卷分析：Band 9 sample Writing Task 2 解题策略 考官范文提纲2： 首段：事实背景铺垫 “As a result of media attention……” 主体段落1： TS: many find unfair 反驳：However, … the notion fairness is not the issue. 主体段落2： TS: others who feel it justified …… Money is the recognition of … Competition is constant 尾段：Personally, I think …… 雅思写作 Task 2 样卷分析：Band 9 sample 范文点评： TR： 正反论证、立场明确 CC： 各段功能清晰；衔接自然 句间连贯自然 LR： 用词范围广、用词准确 GRA： 简单句、复杂句交叉使用 结构丰富多样 样卷分析：Band 5 sample 亮点： 套用句式 主要问题： 基本表达障碍: Chinglish 写作主题不清晰：these knowledge and skills 论证缺乏力度: Writing Task 2雅思写作模板 雅思写作填空式作文 雅思写作“万能模板” As a result of the rapid development of modern society, we could enjoy a much better life than before. However, still some issues, such as whether ……… has attracted more and more attention. In my opinion, it is necessary for us to examine both sides of the issue before offering the personal opinion. Task 2写作结构 “四段式”篇章模板： 首段 背景+观点（题目观点+作者观点） 论证段落1 （驳论段落） 让步衔接词+分论点+论据+反驳 论证段落2 （正论段落） 分论点+论据 尾段 重述观点 Writing Task 2 “活动模板”——段落模板 雅思写作套用句式 真题写作举例： Some people think the skills of letter writing will soon disappear completely. Do you agree or disagree? 雅思写作套用句式 首段套用句式 段落构成 背景介绍 事实背景铺垫 话题背景铺垫 观点 介绍题目论点 介绍作者论点 首段套用句式： 事实背景铺垫 With the rapid development of ……,people become …… With the growing awareness of ……. Increasing number of people …… The birth/invention of...has made an enormous/essential