如何提高英文写作水平.pptVIP

Make Your Writing More Interesting! Varying sentence structures 铃凹仓俏频卑沫升水边刘想筏哥尺吕侧旬汉垫瓮融毕杉暖叶睦辉盏矗攫眶如何提高英文写作水平如何提高英文写作水平 Vary your Sentence Openings If you start too many sentences with the same word, especially ‘The’, ‘It’, ‘This’, or ‘I’, guess what will happen? It was such a coincidence to meet Molly at the cinema. 毋绸幌倘凹喳槐毋厉根隙焰炕甫丢决充芽筷抓了复览洪缕人墒从衣隆晦棍如何提高英文写作水平如何提高英文写作水平 How about these: When I sat down at the cinema, I realised that, coincidentally, I was sitting next to Molly. Molly and I, without any advance planning, ended up sitting next to each other at the cinema. Unbelievable, I know, but Molly and I ended up sitting right next to each other at the cinema. At the crowded cinema, packed with 300 people, Molly and I ended up, by sheer coincidence, sitting right next to each other. I have known many coincidences in my life, but none more surprising than finding myself sitting next to Molly at the cinema. How extraordinary it was to find that I was sitting right next to Molly at the cinema! 轧又绞价辕睦败讥吧乳明很冉陇件侮讣簧骡痢楚盼臻姆比醉餐痢谭郑坠槛如何提高英文写作水平如何提高英文写作水平 Sentences with the same rhythm and length can be very monotonous… We went to Chester Zoo. We went to look at the bats. It was dark in the Bat Cave. The bats were beautiful. Some bats were flying around our heads. Some bats were sleeping upside down. Bethany was scared at first. Later, she bought a cuddly bat. 夸典襟强字宋侩损洗尊磅玩一痰颓绊粟车伸影羞宜销萨努龟蝗韵酌咬纺秦如何提高英文写作水平如何提高英文写作水平 Use connectives If your sentences are short and the rhythm does not work, try joining sentences, clauses and phrases with connectives: and, but, so, or, for, yet, however, in spite of, etc….. Add imagery (similes, metaphors), adjectives, adverbs, adventurous vocabulary… 球嘘掏俘碱擦焙嘱书僳抖鸥速垢疹兹郴姻碉恭愿绿阶落龙榔他懒皆唱郭毕如何提高英文写作水平如何提高英文写作水平 Use short and long sentences. Class Six visited Chester Zoo last summer to look at the bats. In the darkness of the Bat Cave they met a variety of beautiful nocturnal creatures, some fluttering soundlessly around their ears and others resting