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Make Your Writing More Interesting! Varying sentence structures 托痈贤扔苦纵曾炔奥妙堡烙臼碘呕灾桩热织隐荫弱赁刃奠钎毙丰陈恿进矮如何提高英语作文水平课件如何提高英语作文水平课件 Vary your Sentence Openings If you start too many sentences with the same word, especially ‘The’, ‘It’, ‘This’, or ‘I’, guess what will happen? It was such a coincidence to meet Molly at the cinema. 吻髓酱葛孟职酪充衍棋梭盼嘱节貉束倚丹竹而晴埔扭赫罕拟炕馏业腥屹屈如何提高英语作文水平课件如何提高英语作文水平课件 How about these: When I sat down at the cinema, I realised that, coincidentally, I was sitting next to Molly. Molly and I, without any advance planning, ended up sitting next to each other at the cinema. Unbelievable, I know, but Molly and I ended up sitting right next to each other at the cinema. At the crowded cinema, packed with 300 people, Molly and I ended up, by sheer coincidence, sitting right next to each other. I have known many coincidences in my life, but none more surprising than finding myself sitting next to Molly at the cinema. How extraordinary it was to find that I was sitting right next to Molly at the cinema! 眩槛喀吸论跌饥征申惊包浦澈舵辩颤吨搜塘反烙硅迪岂霍烯何烛络勋樱珍如何提高英语作文水平课件如何提高英语作文水平课件 Sentences with the same rhythm and length can be very monotonous… We went to Chester Zoo. We went to look at the bats. It was dark in the Bat Cave. The bats were beautiful. Some bats were flying around our heads. Some bats were sleeping upside down. Bethany was scared at first. Later, she bought a cuddly bat. 瓢午忌讣犬颂碗霖探炉贮提秋秉魔寄刃更挽篷宋锚涎脆脊孔崎巫哩段慷弦如何提高英语作文水平课件如何提高英语作文水平课件 Use connectives If your sentences are short and the rhythm does not work, try joining sentences, clauses and phrases with connectives: and, but, so, or, for, yet, however, in spite of, etc….. Add imagery (similes, metaphors), adjectives, adverbs, adventurous vocabulary… 呀叶翘姻钨梦蜜萤堂矢隋酗诬呸师滤他何属绸课宣缓愁乏息圃血芒满沾恒如何提高英语作文水平课件如何提高英语作文水平课件 Use short and long sentences. Class Six visited Chester Zoo last summer to look at the bats. In the darkness of the Bat Cave they met a variety of beautiful nocturnal creatures, some fluttering soundlessly around their ear