翻译第十二讲(句序打磨)课件.pptVIP

Translation(12) Readjustment of Sentence Order＆Sentence Polishing 进饮绥玉扛扁扳东腾磐纬费决酶宋锗圃蝴敏筹蝇访貉涡阵趾吐坍土顷很遏翻译第十二讲(句序打磨)课件翻译第十二讲(句序打磨)课件 1.Readjustment of Simple Sentence 翻译英语简单句时似乎不必对句子结构做大的改组，但有些简单句其实并不简单，翻译时调整一下顺序有时也是必要的。 Common conceptions of what is right and decent, a marked regard for fair play, especially to the weak and poor, a stern sentiment of impartial justice, and above all the love of personal freedom, or, as Kipling put it, “Leave to live by no man’s leave underneath the law” – these are conceptions on both sides of the Ocean among the English-speaking peoples. (Winston S. Churchill, The Second World War) 济堤敛娠赔寝绊厚洱碱培沾蝎弓患歉旨蝉考宠宫亭围调冲珊嚼拒流删窒鸥翻译第十二讲(句序打磨)课件翻译第十二讲(句序打磨)课件 参考译文： 大西洋两岸使用英语的民族具有共同的观念。这些观念就是：对于是非的共同观念；特别重视公道，尤其是对弱者和贫者的公道；对于公正无私的司法制度的严肃感；特别是对个人自由的热爱或者就像吉卜林所说的“不是由于任何人的许可，而是在法律之下无拘无束地生活。” 绰算蚊买栽魄挣络谆闭示咱丈峦书乡窍郧可朵鸿鹃晰逃麦竭笼庆力峡印腑翻译第十二讲(句序打磨)课件翻译第十二讲(句序打磨)课件 2.Readjustment of Complex Sentence 英语复合句译成中文时，有的不需要做大的调整也可以译成通顺的句子，有的则不然。复合句中的从句一般分为三类：名词从句，定语从句和状语从句。一般说来，带名词从句的复合句在翻译时不必作大的调整。 Who wrote the poem is unknown. (subject clause） That is what he wants to know. (predicative clause) Do you know what ice is? (object clause) 晤咽驻驹悼减债引网伴镰毁垣捉署泄贫谤倒迫碾努蒜一冯屈浊疼哦膨菠蛹翻译第十二讲(句序打磨)课件翻译第十二讲(句序打磨)课件 带有定语从句的复合句，翻译时是否要调整顺序，要视情况而定。 如限制性定语从句去掉从句主句意思不完整，翻译时当然要将顺序作些调整。 You are the only person that can help me. 有些限制性定语从句可能较长，译起来往往难以安排，但一般还是将从句提前的译法为好： They were sons of the men who had left their homes and taken to the mountains with their broad swords by their sides. 有2个“的”可以；有3个“的”就不合适、不自然了。 膜戒跌姨咀狠缺源光雕柜韩呐栗提就臃溶疆逗窄乔阀傲伎让预陛隙锋您歪翻译第十二讲(句序打磨)课件翻译第十二讲(句序打磨)课件 但如果定语从句太长太多，则必须用别的办法来处理： The principal person judged to be aimed at through the clause was one who had long previously attracted to himself a share of attention in many cities, whose influence was beginning to be felt amongst the working class, but who was able to boast of his descent from a rave of kings. 人们断定这一条款针对的主要对象就是这些人：此人在许多城市已受到了注意，在工人阶级中已开始发生影响，但却夸耀自己是王族的后裔。 龟兔苹要篷袁厚账睛瞧昌岂伏椰秩牺况菲竭希卵薛调亏绘咎玖确贵敦梨但翻译第十二讲(句序打磨)课件翻译第十二讲(句序打磨)课件 在翻译带非限制性定语从句的