高三英语书面表达限时测验20.docVIP

1． 书面表达（共1题，满分25分） 假设你叫刘明，高三学生，即将参加高考。你的英语其他题都做得不错，但是作文总是写不好。你给在你学校工作过的外籍老师David英语写作这一问题向他请教，并请他帮忙批改你附上的作文，指出问题的所在，怎么改进。 注意： 1.词数100左右; 2.在内容上允许适当发挥; 3.参考词汇：附 attached to “Martin Luther King Jr. 这一课后，根据下面内容写一篇读后感。词数100 左右。该课文给你留下了深刻的印象。马丁. 路德 . 金是举世闻名的黑人领袖。他为争取人类平等而献身的精神得到世界人民的广泛尊敬。他1964年获得诺贝尔和平奖。他反对种族隔离政策，为争取黑人平等权利而不屈不挠的斗争精神深深感动了你。学习了这一课，你决心努力学习，为维护世界和平而奋斗。 3．Many years ago, when I was fresh out of school and working in Denver, I was driving to my parents home in Missouri for Christmas．I stopped at a gas station about 50 miles from Oklahoma City, where I was planning to stop and visit a friend．While I was standing in line at the cash register(收款台), I said hello to an older couple who were also paying for gas． I took off, but had gone only a few miles when black smoke poured from the back of my car．I stopped and wondered what I should do．A car pulled up behind me．It was the couple I had spoken to at the gas station．They said they would take me to my friends．We chatted on the way into the city, and when I got out of the car, the husband gave me his business card． I wrote him and his wife a thank-you note for helping me．Soon afterward, I received a Christmas present from them．Their note that came with it said that helping me had made their holidays meaningful． Years later, I drove to a meeting in a nearby town in the morning．In late afternoon I returned to my car and found that Id left the lights on all day, and the battery(电池)was dead．Then I noticed that the Friendly Ford dealership - a shop selling cars - was right next door．I walked over and found two salesmen in the showroom． Just how friendly is Friendly Ford? I asked and explained my trouble．They quickly drove a pickup truck to my car and started it．They would accept no payment, so when I got home, I wrote them a note to say thanks．I received a letter back from one of the salesmen．No one had ever taken the time to write him and say thank you, and it meant a lot, he said． Thank you - two po