B7U1Livingwell写作分析.pptVIP

Task-based Writing 读写任务 --- Talking about the disabled 残疾人话题 Have you ever seen any disabled beggars begging along the street? How do people treat (对待)them? 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 Have you been asked for money by some beggars who have disabilities while you’re enjoying shopping? Do you have any pity for that kind of people or just feel afraid? For whatever reasons，the number of disabled beggars bumming(讨乞) along the street has increased rapidly. Why are there so many disabled people begging in the street? The reasons are so various that we don’t need to understand. But at least，we know that they do not lead an easy life. So we should help them in some ways. The treatment for disabled people should go like this: First，accept them. Don’t be afraid of looking at the terrible shape of disabled. Try to treat them equally. Because they are a part of the society，we can’t abandon them. The second is to help them as much as we could. If you can be a volunteer and do some work for the disabled people that would be very nice. That does good not only to disabled people but also to yourself，because you will feel good after your kind action. So give an air of warmth to disabled people，and the world would be much better. 【写作内容】 以约30词概括上文的主要内容。 以约120词就 “How to care for the disabled” 这一话题发表你的看法，内容包括： （1） 对待残疾人的正确态度； （2） 你认为应该如何帮助残疾人； （3） 残疾人也应该享有平等的权利。 【写作要求】 1. 可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中句子；2. 文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。 【评分标准】 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。 take a glance at How to care for the disabled? theme Keep the writing theme in mind(记住) while reading this short essay.(短文) How to care for the disabled? Task 1: Make a summary Let’ try to underline the words and sentences that you think are important for making the summary. There are more and more disabled beggars _______ along the street,____ _____ a _____ life. _________,we should _____ ___ them, like accepting , ________ them and ______ them warmth.(30 w