公开课_高中英语写作分析.ppt

;What makes a good essay? ; 主题 文章结构（段落的分布、过渡、承接） 观点（是否明确、清楚） 词汇语法 ; Structure of a Good Composition;Animals are peoples best friends. But many wild aimals are facing the danger of dying out. On the one hand, their living places are being smaller and smaller; On the other hand, people is killing animals for money.....So we should protect the wildlife and the environment they live in. (Class 9, Chen Bin);It is known that wildlife and human race are living together in the common planet--earth. Wildlife is similar to people. They have their own family, just like, we have our parents who give us warm and power to face the difficulties when we in trouble. If the babies are in danger, they will protect them from attacking by enemies as well. They even devoted themselves to doing it. (Class 9, Shi Kejia);?Supporting Paragraphs (Body) Paragraphs ;The paragraph;Firstly, we should protect environment. A good environment and enough food is important for animals. For example, the Great Pandas, because of not enough food and loss of bamboo growing areas, nearly all disappeared in wild. (Class 9, Wang Feng);A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.;A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.;正确使用有关连接词 ;正确使用有关连接词 ;Firstly Secondly Thirdly ...... ①To begin with/ First of all (reason one) ②In addition/ besides/ furthermore /moreover/ Whats more (reason two) ③At Last/ in the end/ finally/eventually/ Last but not least （reason three）;用于陈述观点的词或短语;The conclusion;Personally,… in conclusion/ in summary/ in brief /on the whole/ all in all/ in a word From what has been stated above, we may draw the conclusion that ... Only in this way, can we.......  ;在保护野生动物措施方面： In conclusion, faced with the threat of animal extinction, we should take effective measures to stop/prevent/protect........ Only in this way, can we live in harmony with wildlife and realize our goal of sustainable development. All in All, face