【优化课堂】高中英语 Unit5 period ⅳ writing课件 新人教版必修5.pptVIP

* Period Ⅳ Writing 原句 1 John was studying in his room when he heard screaming.( 教 材 P38)约翰正在房间里学习，突然听到尖叫声。 点评 这个长句是由两个简单句合并而成： ①John was studying in his room. ②He heard screaming. 合并：句①和句②所表示的动作几乎同时发生，它们之间 有“正在……突然……”的逻辑关系，可以用 when 将其合并。 仿写 ①我正在上网，突然电脑坏掉了。 ______________________________________________________ ②他正在睡觉，突然有人敲门。 ______________________________________________________ I was surfing the internet when the computer broke down. He was sleeping when someone knocked at the door. 原句 2 It was Johns quick action and knowledge of first aid that saved Ms Slades life.(教材 P38)正是约翰的快速反应和急救知识 挽救了斯莱德女士的生命。 点评 这个长句是一个简单句的强调形式： Johns quick action and knowledge of first aid saved Ms Slades life. 为了强调句子中的主语 Johns quick action and know-ledge of first aid 这个部分，所以把它置于 It was...that... 这个强调结 构中。 仿写 ①正是他的努力造就了他的成功。 ______________________________________________________ ②他昨天见到的就是他的偶像。 ______________________________________________________ It was his effort that led to his success. It was his idol that he saw yesterday. 原句 3 There is no doubt that Johns quick thinking and the first aid skills he learned at school saved Ms Slades life.(教材 P38)毫无疑 问，是约翰敏捷的思维和在学校学到的急救技术挽救了斯莱德 女士的生命。 点评 这个长句是由三个简单句合并而成： ①There is no doubt. ② Johns quick thinking and the first aid skills saved Ms Slades life. ③He learned the first aid skills at school. 合并之第一步：由于句②和句③之间有共同的成分 the first aid skills，可以用定语从句将其合并：Johns quick thinking and the first aid skills (that) he learned at school saved Ms Slades life. 合并之第二步：用 that 做引导词，连接 doubt 和后面的同 位语从句。 仿写 ①毫无疑问，他所取得的成绩让他父母骄傲。 ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ②毫无疑问，她自己做的礼物是最珍贵的。 ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ There is no doubt that the achievement (that) he has got makes his parents proud. There is no doubt that the gift she makes by herself is the most p