作文修改6（Composition Amendment 6）.docVIP

作文修改6（Composition Amendment 6） Composition Amendment 6 (a) in March, bright spring days, the recovery of all things, (1) around the campus green. (2) in the green ocean, there are stars with different colors: red, yellow and white...... The flowers are all open. (3) the white flowers printed in the eye are the most lovely. Look, that few stunted trees covered with flowers, it leaves little rich multicolored decorations, even the body also squeezed back. (4) again, so small a flower, but seven or eight layers of petals, densely packed together, like a little girl together face. The leaves and flowers of small trees look so small and lovely. Look, there are a few long grass under the tree - tree guardians, dancing in the wind, and (5) seem to have such a master and proud of it? 1 (1), the phrase should be converted to repeat wordy, the campus is full of green or green campus. 2 (2), the sentence has a word of improper use, should put the word hidden into embellishment. 3 (3), the sentence has a spelling, the word India word for word Ying. 4, according to the context, (4) the sentence has a word and above echoed properly, should take look into in the sentence. 5, No. (5) in the tone of a little problem, also should be recast as if in such a proud owner. (for a question mark or an exclamation mark). (two) Yang Liang junior middle school students in our school, pupils, usually learn hard, all-round development, all subjects are more than 90 points or more. He not only pays attention to the study in class, but also pays great attention to extracurricular learning, and pays attention to the use of book knowledge to solve practical problems. According to his teacher: Li introduced in the speech contest, Yang Liang students with a barrage of Mandarin, terrific posture, profound knowledge won the judges praise, the speech contest won first prize in one fell swoop. 1, the correct two wrong words: G for the moment, change the type of potential. 2, to correct the inappropriate u