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1.The choreographer Katherine Dunham having trained as an anthropologist,she studied dance in Jamaica,Haiti,and Senegal.??Katherine Dunham,who was also a trained antropologist,studied点评：K是一个编舞家，同时又学过人类学。所以用…also…结构。同时K作为主语，通常放在句首，后接一个句，再接谓语。在描述某人时正确语序经常如此。2. Weight training was begun by the girl to enhance her strength and flexibility.The girl had begun the exercise of weight training to enhance点评：搭配不当。因该是”begin exercise” 放入句中，用过去完成时。同时注意主语最好放在句首，一般勿倒装。3．One of the most common types of mistakes that inexperienced drivers make is failing to signal for a lane change;another one that occurs