2011专八作文范例讲评.docx

2011专八作文范例（附阅卷老师讲评）2011年八级作文题目According to a recent newspaper report, many famous sites of historical interest in China have begun or are considering charging tourists higher entry fees during peek travel seasons. This has aroused a lot of public attention and also public debate. What is your opinion? Should famous Chinese sites of historical interest charge higher fees during peek travel seasons? Write an essay of about 400 words.In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. You should supply an appropriate title for your essay.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.范例一：12.5分及格作文Recently, there is a newspaper report which has drawn a lot of attention. It says that many famous sites of historical interest have started to increase the fees during peak travel seasons. In my opinion, famous sites of historical interest should charge higher fees during peak travel seasons.First, charging higher fees during peak travel seasons is a method to balance the application and need. Higher fees would decrease the number of tourists. In peak travel seasons, most people have enough time to go where they want to go. Famous sites of historical interest become their destinations. Too many people deepen the press of environment, hotels and lives in sites. They would make a lot of wastes and noises which would pollute the environment and influence the other’s lives. Too many people would cause the trouble in booking a hotel. These all affect the environment of sites. Second, a lot of people go to travel at the same time. It would increase the number of cars. Traffic would be in a very slow situation. Traffic jam and accidents would rise in a high number. It would put ou