写作：经历感受.pptVIP

The author mainly tells us one of his experiences of being helped by strangers. After he wrote them a thank-you note, he realized that expressing gratitude meant so much. 概括的人称__________ 概括的时态_________ 第三人称 叙事：过去式 I have a similar experience as the author. Once when I was about to go home after school, it was raining so heavily that I had to wait for the rain to stop. But after half an hour it was still raining. Seeing this, the guard at the gate offered me his umbrella. Thanks to his help, I got home on time without getting wet. The next morning, when I returned the umbrella to the guard, I left him a note expressing my gratitude sincerely. To my surprise, he said no one had ever written him to say thank you, and it meant a lot to him, which really makes it difficult for me to forget. In my opinion, simply saying “thank you” may benefit both the person who is thanked and the person who expresses gratitude. Just like the older couple in the passage, those who are thanked also want to express their gratitude back, which helps form a harmonious atmosphere among people. 主题：叙述你或你的朋友类似“揠苗助长”的经历和感受 The story reminds me of a similar experience of my friend. He was once badly ill and went to see the doctor. The doctor gave him some pills, telling him to take them three times a day. However, he failed to follow the doctor’s advice and took them 6 times a day. To his great surprise, he became worse. Just as the old saying goes, “more haste less speed”. No matter what we do, we should obey the law of nature. It is the same with our studies. Only by learning step by step can we achieve something. 一、写作技巧 经历感受通常只需包含“谁？干了什么事？结果如何？”等, 然后再谈谈本人对此次经历的看法及感受或是从这次经历中得出了什么经验教训。 写经历时, 可用借鉴原文法。因为写经历就是写记叙文, 将记叙文的几个要素替换就行了, 但一定要注意主题与原文故事一致。如: 原材料是一个女孩因牙齿太大被别人嘲笑, 但她通过努力最终取得了成功。我们就可说张三因身材矮小被人瞧不起, 但他通过努力取得了成功。 二、句式模板 引出经历： (1)The story reminds me of my experience... 这个故事让我想起了我自己的经历…… (2)This story reminds me of a similar experience of my fr