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俞;1.个人介绍 2.雅思写作和评分标准 3.雅思小作文 4.答疑;标签：金牛座 雅思老师 各种其它 雅思主攻方向：阅读 写作 口语 现在职业：杭州中科留学旗下北美考试院 美剧喜欢角色：Dr. Sheldon Cooper 联系方式：057192 (我不一定在，美丽的妹纸一定都在);考什么？ 为什么？ 所以呢？;可以用模板吗？ 怎样短期内快速提分？ 怎样长期复习快速提分？;小作文各图的考点是什么？ 饼图/线图/柱图/表格图/组合图 地图 流程图 ;单饼图———— 不会考 多饼图———— 两种，单位图；百分比图 单位图：C7T4(4饼,5项)； 百分比图：C9T3(4饼,3项)；C8T2(3饼,5项)； 有饼的组合图 C8T1 ;The pie chart shows that there are four main causes of farmland becoming degraded in the world today. Globally, 65% of degradation is caused by too much animal grazing and tree clearance, constituting 35% and 30% respectively. A further 28% of global degradation is due to over-cultivation of crops. Other causes account for only 7% collectively. ;The charts compare the sources of electricity in Australia and France in the years 1980 and 2000. Between these years electricity production almost doubled, rising from 100 units to 170 in Australia, and from 90 to 180 units in France.;In 1980 Australia used coal as the main electricity source (50 units) and the remainder was produced from natural gas, hydro power ( each producing 20 units) and oil (which produced only 10 units). By 2000, coal had become the fuel for more than 75% of electricity produced and only hydro continued to be another significant source supplying approximately 20%.;In contrast, France used coal as a source for only 25 units of electricity in 1980, which was matched by natural gas. The remaining 40 units were produced largely from oil and nuclear power, with hydro contributing only 5 units. But by 2000 nuclear power, which was not used at all in Australia, had developed into the main source, producing almost 75% of electricity, at 126 units, while coal and oil together produced only 50 units. Other sources were no longer significant.;Overall, it is clear that by 2000 these two countries relied on different principal fuel sources: Australia relied on coal and France on nuclear power.;问1： 哪些上涨了？ 哪些下降了？ 哪些涨了又跌？ 哪些跌了又涨？;Para1. 总起————改写标题 Para.2 比重最大的—— 一直最大 (teach