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手把手教你提高雅思写作分数　　为了帮助考生们更好地备考雅思写作考试，文都国际小编给大家带来手把手教你提高雅思写作分数，希望同学们看过之后对自己的备考有所帮助!　　基础差的同学(目前只有5分或者更低)永远是注意语法和表达，如果你的目标是6分(特别是你只有一个月的时间)。不建议目标考7分，很多雅思作文老师教书那么多年，都未必考7分。　　先说语法：　　只要你的一段话，出现4种错误(1.谓语动词 2.句子结构残缺 3.词性错误 4.名词单复数和不可数名词写复数)超过2次，基本上就是5.5分封顶，一考一个准。　　大家可以看看这个学生的段落，作文题目是关于人们要不要做temporary jobs。　　On the other hand, people just work for a short time, which means they cannot accumulate experience and acquire some skills. They will not succeed as they cannot gain the accept from their boss. People just doing some simple work means that they do not have much more responsibility. For example, although someone has worked for many different restaurants, he still do not understand how to manage a restaurant. A normal clerk never be a manager if he always changes his workplace.　　第三句话出现了句子people doing simple work 充当句子主语的语法错误。然后后面出现了he do主谓不一致，never be a manager，谓语动词不完整的错误。　　看完这一段，我可以知道这个学生最高就是5.5分的水平。　　备考建议：　　1. 这些学生建议刚开始不要忙着写作文，写也是错的;　　2.踏实花1个星期学习语法，通过100句翻译提升句子结构的例子，通过我的教学材料《语法知识》的改错题来提升句子改错能力。　　只有你减少了语法错误，写作文才是6分。　　再说表达：　　表达就是要用词伙，不要用中国式表达和翻译。　　我们看下面这个学生的段落：　　Some people tend to take temporary jobs because they can gain an increasing number of time to cultivate their interests which can improve peoples talent and potential. It is helpful for personal development.They may be unfamiliar with their talents,abilities and career plans when they commence with the works.For example, some people attend the electronic business courses,so they may find that they have the abilities to run a business.Therefor,they may earn a large number of money and gain more achievements.　　这个学生的语法没有太大问题，句子结构基本准确，但是他的分数最高就是6分，因为他有很多比较中式的表达：　　an increasing number of time 应该是gain more time　　improve talents 应该是develop talents　　career plans 应该是career path, or career mence with works 应该是enter the workforce, or launch their career　　gain achievements应该是achieve greater success　　这些文章在中国人眼里看，问题不大，毕竟我们将他的单词翻译成中文，也能看懂，但是问题是考官是外国人，没有中文的背景，就很难理解。　　备考建议：　　可以选择我的两本书《手把手教你雅思写作》和《手把手教你雅思词汇》来积累基本的词汇，地道表达，也可以看一下外国人写的文章，