Writing人教必修5unit4_making_the_news_writing.ppt

* 人教课标 高二 必修 5 Unit 4 新闻报道是关于最近发生的重要而新鲜的事情的报道或评述,写好一篇高质量的新闻报道应注意以下两个方面: 即新闻的题目。它是文章的眼睛，既要体现鲜明的个性，又要生动、形象、有美感，才能引人入胜。 是新闻报道内容的概括和浓缩，包括五大要素：时间，地点，人物，起因和结果。导语是新闻报道的精华，也是信息传递的集中体现。 是导语之后的新闻展开，补充更加充实。 新闻报道由于是反映最近所发生的重要而新鲜的事，所以时态以现在时，过去时为主；篇幅一般不长，内容短小精悍，多用动词，长短句交错使用。 5月1日，高二(3)班的学生志愿者去阳光敬老院开展志愿者活动(送水果、打扫、聊天等)。假如你是校报的英语记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则100-120个词的新闻报道。 要求： 1. 时间，地点，人物，活动。 2. 老人们的反应。 3. 简短评论。 第一步 认真审题(analyze the requirements) 第二步 谋篇布局(draw up an outline) 第三步 联句成篇(organize the sentences) 第四步 锦上添花(get the article polished up) 第五步 查漏补缺 (check the mistakes) 审主题students,___________________ 审体裁 ________ 审人称 ________ 审时态 ____________ 审要求 time, place, persons, activities reaction of the elderly brief evaluation did voluntary work a letter the third the past tense ｛ 标题(headline) Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine What would be the headline of this composition? 导语 (lead) Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, ________ Sunshine Nursing Home and ________________________. went to did some voluntary work 正文 (body) They _________ the elderly _____ flowers and fruits. Then they started working at once, __________________ and ________________. Everything done, they sat in the yard ____________________________. presented with cleaning the windows sweeping the floor chatting with the elderly people 评语 (evaluation) What they did has brought ____ to others and ________ their own lives. joy enriched 时间顺序 空间顺序 合适的过渡性词汇 逻辑角度 first, second, then, finally /at last , soon, immediately, suddenly here, there, on one side… on the other side,in front of, at the back of, next to 对称顺序 转折顺序 合适的过渡性词汇 逻辑角度 for one thing, for the other thing, on one hand, on the other hand but, however, while, though, otherwise 因果顺序 条件顺序 合适的过渡性词汇 逻辑角度 because, since, as, thanks to, as a result (of) as long as, so long as, on condition that, if, unless 让步顺序 递进顺序 合适的过渡性词汇 逻辑角度 though, as, even if/though, whether, who (what, when, where) ever what’s more, b