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顾家北手把手教你雅思写作 提分大忌 1 开头段太长 2 模板，什么admittedly, firstly, secondly一顿用 3 套句太多，there is no double that无处不用 4 忽视逻辑，写不相关的东西凑字数 5 句子过分复杂不注意意思连贯；不知道定语从句和名词性从句的正确使用，却硬着头皮乱用。 6 死背替换词和连接词，譬如说什么besides, moreover, 不注意词伙和地道的表达 7 语法小错误太多， 特别是句子结构和谓语的错误 8 依赖背过的材料和单词，不注意审题和扣题 9 中式思维，把大脑里的一些中文翻译成英文，但是不够具体 Response 1 The chart presents information about the difference of time spent by different genders on daily activities in UK. Both genders spend the largest amount of their time on sleep (8.04 hours for male and 8.18 hours for female), while they only spend around 0.15 hour on other activities. Males spend 3.45 hours on their employment and study and this activity only takes females 2.26 hours in a day. In contrast, the time spent by females on housework and childcare are nearly twice the figure for males. Response 2 However, men spend more time on leisure activities than women. The figure for men is 5.25 hours, 0.8 hours higher than the figure for their counterparts. Similarly, working and study takes up 3.45 hours of men, while women only spend 2.26 hours on it every day. Females tend to do more housework than men, since they spend twice as much as time on it(3 hours versus 1.41 hours). Overall, males in the United Kingdom work longer than females, whereas women do more housework than men. Why lots of people spit and throw rubbish in the lake, mountain and on the beach? How to solve this problem? Response 1 one reason for this is that the improved living standard enables people to produce more rubbish than before. However , there are not adequate room for so much rubbish. As a consequence , people have to spit and throw rubbish in some place where there are less people , such as lake ,mountain and the beach. Response 2 A major reason for this problem is that a large number of people do not have the awareness of environmental conservation and they are not conscious of their environmental responsibilities. They do not realise the importance of making contribution to