2017广州小升初英语第六坑——写作坑.PDFVIP

六年级QQ 交流群： 230301939 五年级QQ 群：206240974 四年级 QQ 群：479708214 课程咨询热线：4000-121-121 官方网站：/ 2017 广州小升初英语第六坑——写作坑 一看要求二看信息三列提纲四写作文~ 五字工整六信息全七字数够八要检查~ 广州爱智康英语团队原创，转载请注明出处 一、坑人现场 【第八届2017 春季广州学而思小学综合测评 （六年级·英语样卷）】 书面表达 （共 10 分） 阅读以下一篇故事，写出你的读后感。 要求：用两到三句话概括文章大意，并写出自己的个人看法，可结合自身经历。 字数：80~120 词。 Once there were two mice. They were friends. One mouse lived in the country; the other mouse lived in the city.After many years, the Country mouse saw the City mouse; he said, Do come and see me at my house inthe country. So the City mouse went.The City mouse said, This food is not good, and your house is not good. Why do you live in a hole inthe field? You should come and live in the city.You would live in a nice house made of stone. You would have nice food to eat. You must come and see me at my house in the city. The Country mouse went to the house of the City mouse. It was a very good house. Nice food was set ready forthem to eat. But just as they began to eat they heard a great noise. The City mouse cried, Run! Run!The cat is coming! They ran away quickly and hid. After some time, they came out. When they came out, the Country mouse said, I do not like living in the city. I like living in my hole in the field. For it is nicer to be poor and happy, than to be rich and afraid. 二、Where is 坑？Why 掉坑里？ 书面表达主要考查的是小朋友们的语言组织能力和语言输出能力。说实话，这是最考验英语 实力的一道题目，考验你能不能把所学的知识有逻辑地输出出来。不用说小朋友了，就算是 大人，让你写一篇作文都要挠头抓腮的。大部分小朋友在书面表达这里都会丢个3-5 分，仅 有少数能拿高分。 那为什么小朋友们会陷入低分作文的坑呢？原因如下： （1）生词太多，看不懂句子，不知道故事在讲什么； （2）没看要求，没有用两到三句话概括文章大意 （信息不完整）； （3）走马观花式地看了写作要求，写的时候陷入写什么内容的死环里，忘了先概括； （4）平常看书比较少、思考也比较少，看完故事后没什么想法，不知道如何写读后感； （5）字数不够80 词，明显篇幅过短； （6）语法错误较多，单词拼写错误较多； （7）句式较单一，多为简单句，表达不流利，逻辑不清晰； （8）字迹不工整； （9）写作能力太差或时间不够，没写作文。 1 六年级QQ 交流群： 230301939 五年级QQ 群：206240974 四年级 QQ 群：479708214