Unit 16 Period Five Communication Workshop 课件.ppt

第三步：扩点成句 1．I still remember how nervous I was on my first day in the new school three years ago when I found it difficult to follow my teacher in the first English class. 2．The English teacher came to me while I was reading the text as aloud as other students. 3．She gave me a big smile and said she liked my voice very much. 4．Thanks to the comforting smile，I began to be confident. 5．Since then not only can I follow the teacher，but also I have been improving my English gradually. 【参考范文】 I still remember ①how nervous I was on my first day in the new school three years ago，②when I found ③it difficult to follow my teacher in the first English class. In the morning class the next day，the English teacher came to me ④while I was reading the text as aloud as other students.After listening to me for a while, she gave me a big smile and said she liked my voice very much. ⑤Thanks to the comforting smile in my first morning class, I began to be confident.Since then ⑥not only can I follow the teacher，but also I have been improving my English gradually. 【名师点津】 亮点一：本文第一部分讲述了我作为一个新生在第一天的第一节英语课上遇到的困难；第二部分讲述了老师的微笑帮我解决了困难；第三部分感谢老师给了我自信，且英语成绩逐步提高。层次分明，条理清晰。 亮点二：文中多处使用了复合句：①how引导的宾语从句；②when引导的非限制性定语从句；③while引导的时间状语从句。为本文增加了得分点。 亮点三：精彩词语④thanks to；⑤not only...but also以及⑥形式宾语it的运用，使文章内容生动，丰富。 【写作模板】 I still remember ___________________________(简短介 绍当时发生的情况)．The teacher spoke English throughout the class，which ________________(自己的主要问题是什么)． In the morning the next day，while I was reading the text，the teacher ________________(别人对自己的鼓励和表扬)．A week later, I volunteered to ________________(自己的进步与变化)． Thanks to the comforting smile, I began to ______________ __________ (别人的鼓励给自己带来的信心和变化)． Thanks！ Unit 16 Period Five Communication Workshop Ⅰ.单词识记 1．________ adj. troublesome 2．________ adj. having little skill；clumsy 3．________ adj. nervous 4．________ adj. feeling as if everything were turning round 5．________ v. show approval by clapping the hands 6．________ adj. heavy and ungraceful in moveme