初中七年级下册 英语7-12单元复习教案.ppt

作文要求： 　　1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。 　　2. 语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的标题、开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。 My Earth Hour 2011 　　The Earth Hour was from 8: 30 pm to 9: 30 pm on Saturday, March 26th this year. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in. 【审题谋篇】 　　1. 本篇要求记录已经发生的事件，应为记叙文文体，主要考查学生运用已学知识表述对过去事情的描述和感想。 　　2. 人称：第一人称。 　　3. 主要时态：一般过去时。 　　4. 高分模板： 【佳作诵读】 My Earth Hour 2011 (没参与) 　　The Earth Hour was from 8: 30 pm to 9: 30 pm on Saturday, March 26th this year. It was a pity that I didn’t realize it was Earth Hour until I watched news on TV. At that time, I was shopping with my mother at the mall. As a student, I have done lots of things to protect the environment. For example, I always carry a cloth bag while shopping. Besides, I often ride a bike to school instead of taking a bus. I think we can care for the earth by doing so. Let’s take part in the Earth Hour next year. 　　I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in. My Earth Hour 2011 (参与) 　　The Earth Hour was from 8: 30 pm to 9: 30 pm on Saturday, March 26th this year. It was the moment my friends and I waited for a long time. We talked and played games at home with all the lights off. We were glad to be in the Earth Hour. As a student, I have done lots of things to protect the environment. For example, I always carry a cloth bag while shopping. Besides, I often ride a bike to school instead of taking a bus. I think we can care for the earth by doing so. Let’s take part in the Earth Hour next year. 　　I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in. 【名师点睛】 　　(1)两篇文章都采用总——分——总的叙述方式对Earth Hour活动进行了说明，结构严谨； 　　(2)在描述个人活动时，通过运用过去时和完成时，既有细节描述，又有对过去所做事情的总结回顾，两者的有效结合体现了作者的综合运用语言的能力。 (3)天气中的修饰词“大”： ①大风：______ wind； ②大雨(雪)：______ rain(snow)； ③雨(雪)下得很大：rain