对比比较类基础写作.ppt

假设你是学校太阳能汽车研究小组的成员，请用英文写一篇短文，对比介绍太阳能汽车和普通汽车，主要信息点如下： 比较与对比的写法有两种。一种叫“One Side at a Time”（逐面比较），另一种叫做“Point by Point”（逐点比较）。 逐面比较重点放在被比较和对比的两方面或两种事物上，先描述A，再描述B； 逐点比较重点放在不同事物的各个特征，先描述A的某一特征，再比对着描述B的特征，交叉描写。 主要词汇： 1.太阳能 汽车 2. 能力 3.汽油 4.燃料 5.优点 6. 缺点 7.安全的 8.清洁的 9.能量小 10. 速度慢 11.行驶 12.方便 13.环境 14. 发展 15. 技术 16.提高能量 确定5个要点，列出提纲 不能逐句翻译，注意重组材料（有时要重组句子，调整所给要点的顺序，有时要增加内容使得句子前后连贯、顺畅) 用自己熟悉的句型结构和词语，力求文理通顺，语言准确。没有把握的词句不写，适当使用从句。 确定5个要点，列出提纲（逐点比较） 1.太阳能汽车是使用阳光作为能力的汽车而普通汽车是使用汽油或燃气作为燃料的汽车。 开始着手翻译5个句子 太阳能汽车是使用阳光作为能力的汽车而普通汽车是使用汽油或燃气作为燃料的汽车。 2.两种汽车都有优点和缺点。 Both of them have advantages and disadvantages.(单句） 4. 普通汽车能量足使用方便，但他们污染环境。 Common cars have strong power and they are convenient to use, but they pollute the environment. 整理和润色：注意句子的开头，标点符号，分段，适当使用连接词等 Solar cars are cars that use sunlight for power while common cars use gas or petrol as their fuel. Both of them have advantages and disadvantages. Solar cars are safe and clean, but they have low power, they are slow and they cannot run at night. Common cars have strong power and they are convenient to use, but they pollute the environment. I think we need to develop future technologies to improve the power for solar cars and to use clean energy for common cars. 概括 The writer illustrates that it is important to teach children some skills of becoming good citizens. Therefore, he suggests teaching children to pick up things by themselves, to respect others and follow the laws. （1）你认为文明市民 (a civilized citizen) 应具备什么素质，列举两三种文明行为； As far as I am concerned, a civilized citizen is supposed to respect others. In public places, such as restaurants, stations or hospitals, a civilized citizen would not speak or talk loudly. Besides, a civilized citizen ought to be always ready to reach out their helping hands. Last but not the l