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【参考范文】 One Thing Im Proud of I still remember how I became a good table tennis player. The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good.Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to challenge the good players.At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class. I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realise that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work.It also helps me better understand the proverb “Practice makes perfect.” 【亮点说明】 本文思路清晰、结构工整，采取了典型的总——分——总的结构。行文流畅、过渡自然，而且熟练地使用了一些高级结构，如：宾语从句、状语从句、介词短语等。体现了考生优秀的语法功底与灵活运用语言的能力。 五、夹叙夹议文 1．写作技巧 写作夹叙夹议类作文应该注意以下几点： (1)先叙述作者亲历或所见所闻的一件事情，然后针对这件事情发表自己对生活的看法，或揭示生活的真理。 (2)发表议论，即不同人对该事件的不同看法，或正反观点的对比。发表议论的过程要紧扣材料中心确立论点，论据要真实可信，论证过程要有说服力和感染力。 (3)发表自己的观点，同时对文章作出总结。 2．常用写作模板 Nowadays，there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. ______(一个具体的社会问题或现象)has increasingly become a common concern of the public.According to a survey，______ (说明这种现象的情况或举一个例子)． There are a couple of reasons leading to this problem/phenomenon.For one thing，______ (理由一)；for another，______(理由二)．Whats more，______ (理由三)． ______(这个社会问题或现象)has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life，which has been articulated in the following aspects.First，_________ (影响一)；second，______(影响二)． Based on the above discussions，I can easily forecast that more and more people will______(作出某种反应)． 3．写作要求 (1)基本时态：一般现在时； (2)人称：第一人称和第三人称； (3)写作内容：介绍事件及其对他人的影响，给出自己的观点。 4．典型例题 (2014福建卷)如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。 “Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.” — Sir Winston, Churchill 内容要求： (1)你对该引语的理解； (2)你的相关经历； (3)恰当的结尾。 注意： (1)短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； (2)文中不能出现考生的具体信息； (3)词数：120左右。 This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that _____