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揭阳市2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（3）附参考范文 短文改错---- (2010·河北部分重点联考) Dear Anish， Here are the information about Manchester University.1.________ It is about 200 miles far away from London, and it 2.________ has a very big schoolyard. You can live in the school3.________ or near the school. They have all sorts of course.4.________ Im sure you will find one you like it. I know you5.________ are particular interested in human rights. So I will 6.________ see that there is anything on their website(网址).7.________ Ill send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport8.________ when you arrived. You met him a few years ago, but he 9.________ has changed a lot since then. Both your aunt or I look10.________ forward to seeing you again. See you soon. Peter 答案与解析： 1．are→is　information是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式。 2．去掉far　far通常不与表示具体距离的数词连用。 3．√ 4．course→courses　根据句中的all sorts of可知，这里要表示的是各种各样的课程，因此应用复数形式。 5．去掉it　“(that) you like”是定语从句，修饰先行词one。在从句中，关系代词that作like的宾语，所以it多余。 6．particular→particularly　interested是形容词，应使用副词修饰。 7．that→if/whether　根据上一句中的内容可知这里的意思是看网络上“是否”有相关信息。 8．meet前加to　此处是不定式表示目的。 9．arrived→arrive　如果主句是一般将来时，时间状语从句通常用一般现在时。 10．or→and　此处是“both...and...”结构，表示“两者都”。 *******************************************************结束 短文改错---多余词 多词一般为：冠词/连词/介词/系词be 助词等。 【1】连词多余： *They did not want breakfast because that they were going out early in the morning. 解析：连词多余，故此去掉 (that)，原句是状语从句。 【2】介词多余： *The crowd waiting for to greet them in England was very surprised.(for) 解析：没有宾语，所以去掉for。 【3】冠词多余： *Suddenly I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd. 解析：固定短语，catch sight of :偶然看见。 【4】系词/助词多余： *My mother was asked : “Have you taken medicine ?” 解析：根据句意，是妈妈问：故为主动语态。 短文改错--------------缺词 缺词一般为：冠词/连词/介词/系词be 助词/ 【1】缺介词 *He was looking for a glass ^the cupboard (in) 解析：根据句意，in the cupboard 做状语。 【2】缺冠词 *However, the popular teacher is at^ same time the one who should be strict with students.(the) 解析：形容词same 和the 搭配使用,故给same前加 the。 【3】缺连接词 *In one class, I learned^ it rained (why) 解析：根据句子意思可知，缺连接词，句意为