习作教学的突围.ppt

1作文没啥可怕的 2作文要讲究点技巧 3作文要有自己的个性 4作文就是生活 清洁工笑了笑说：“改善小区环境，是我应尽的职责！” 她不好意思地抬起头，“当城市的美容师，我很荣幸！” “为了争创文明卫生城市，苦了我一个，幸福千万家！”说完，大妈埋头干起来。  技巧一：把大动作写成“小动作” 技巧二：多用说话的的几种形式，少用“说” 技巧三：心理活动不要出现“我想” 技巧四：尽量少出现“高兴、难过、生气”的词语 技巧五：开头很重要 技巧六，结尾要讲究，不一定要加“光明的尾巴” 技巧七： 多分几个自然段 技巧八：题目要亮眼 技巧九：要有波折感 技巧十：环境描写来渲染 2.“开始，接着、然后”病 3.“外貌”病 4.“记得有一次”病 5.“喘不过气”病 Contents Click to add Title 1 Click to add Title 2 Click to add Title 3 Click to add Title 4 Hot Tip How do I incorporate my logo to a slide that will apply to all the other slides? On the [View] menu, point to [Master], and then click [Slide Master] or [Notes Master]. Change images to the one you like, then it will apply to all the other slides. [Image information in product] ● Image –www.photosclub.co.kr ● Note to customers: This image has been licensed to be used within this PowerPoint template only. You may not extract the image for any other use. Diagram Add your title in here Add your title in here ThemeGallery is a Design Digital Content Contents mall developed by Guild Design Inc. ThemeGallery is a Design Digital Content Contents mall developed by Guild Design Inc. Diagram ThemeGallery is a Design Digital Content Contents mall developed by Guild Design Inc. ThemeGallery is a Design Digital Content Contents mall developed by Guild Design Inc. ThemeGallery is a Design Digital Content Contents mall developed by Guild Design Inc. ThemeGallery is a Design Digital Content Contents mall developed by Guild Design Inc. Click to add Text Click to add Text Click to add Text Click to add Text Diagram 50% 24% 10% 16% 50% 24% 16% 10% Products Description of the company’s products Service Description of the company’s service Technology Description of the company’s technology Market Description of the company’s market Diagram Products Description of the company’s products Service Description of the company’s service Technology Description of the company’s technology Market Description of the comp