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智 课 网 雅 思 备 考 资 料 3个标准定义雅思好作文 3个标准定义雅思好作文。同学们如何应对备考雅思呢?下面是智课 小编为同学们搜索整理的有关雅思好作文的3个评判标准介绍。希望对 同学们的雅思 考试有所帮助，下面和智课小编一起来看看吧： 写好作文有三个标准，分别为统一性、完整性，连贯性，下面，我 们就来对这三个标准做一详细说明。 首先，一个段落必须有一个中心即主题思想，该中心由主题句特别 是其中的题旨来表达。整个段落必须紧扣这个主题(stick or hold to the topic)，这就是段落的统一性(unity)。其次，一个段落必须有若干 推展句，使主题思想得到充分展开，从而给读者一个完整的感觉，这就 是完整性(completeness or adequateness)。再者，一个段落不是杂 乱无章的，而是有机的组合，句子的排列顺序必须合乎逻辑，从一个句 子到另一个句子的过渡必须流畅(smooth)，这就是连贯性(coherence) 。 1. 统一性 一个段落内的各个句子必须从属于一个中心，任何游离于中心思想 之外的句子都是不可取的。请看下例 ： Joe and I decided to take the long trip wed always wanted across the country. We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner. To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico. 本段的主题句是段首句，controlling idea(中心思想)是take the long trip across the country。文中出现两个irrelevant sentences，一个是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie，这 一段是讲的是Joe and I ，中间出现一个Bella是不合适的。还有，Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner这一句更是与主题句不相 关。考生在四级统考的作文卷上常常因为造出 irrelevant sentences(不相关语句)而丢分，值得引起注意。再看一个例子： My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again. I bought two new suitcases last week. Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was a premature baby. 本段的controlling idea 是like to deep physically fit，但段中有两个irrelevant sentences，一个是I bought two ne