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Welcome to ES;上海高考英语书面表达;写作共25分.各档次评分细则如下表所示. 评分标准 1.本题总分为25分,其中内容10分,语言10分,组织结构5分. 2.评分时应注意的主要方面:内容要点,应用词汇,语言结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性. 3.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定所属档次,然后对照相应的组织结构档次给与加分.其中,内容和语言两部分相加,得15分或以上者,可考虑加4-5分,15分以下者只能考虑加0,1,2,3分. 4.词数少于70,总分最多不超过10分. 各档次给分要求: A.内容充实,主题突出,详略得当. B.内容较充实,能表达出作文要求. C.内容基本充实,尚能表达出作文要求. D.漏掉或未能写出清楚主要内容,有些内容与主题无关. E.明显漏掉主要内容,严重离题.;;命题趋势;2. 内容——与时俱进；贴近生活 如08年上海卷：题目作文题目是“班级将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛，班长希望大家积极参与。请对此谈谈你的想法”。这个话题吻合了教育部提出的开展校园集体舞的热点，考生和老师都觉得这是一个很不错的作文题目，考生们有话要说，有话可说，这样的作文题有助于考生发挥出真实的英语语言水平，又很好地达到高考写作检测的目的。属于半开放性的作文。;复习策略;写作秘诀;增加文采小窍门; 首先读两篇小小短文，并说说你的看法 Yesterday went fishing it rained he went back quickly he had no fish that day . 2. Yesterday Peter went fishing on the way to the river it suddenly began to rain heavily as a result he had to return quickly with no fish to take home 你看出了什么问题，哪一篇意思更明了，应怎样修改？;1.Yesterday Peter went fishing .It rained. He went back quickly .He had no fish that day . 2.Yesterday Peter went fishing .On the way to the river it suddenly began to rain heavily. As a result ,he had to return quickly with no fish to take home . 小短文是这样，高考作文更应讲究结构严谨，过渡自然，条理清晰 ，中心明确。 那么，怎样才能快速达到这一要求呢？;Introduction;2011年高考语法复习; 所谓三段式就是将一篇书面表达按三段的写作模式谋篇布局。三段式的模式写法通常为： 第一段开门见山，提出要解决的问题或观点，或者把时间、地点、人物和主要事情及时点出。 常用于文章开头的句型： 1)As is seen in the picture, …;What is shown in the chart is … 2)I am a …; I am writing to … 2) There is a general discussion today about the issue of....; Those who object to... argue that ...;They believe that...; But people who favor ..., on the other hand, argue that ... 4) Now people in growing number are coming to realize that... . ;4) Now people in growing number are coming to realize that... 5) Now it is commonly held that ...; they think ...; But I doubt whether... 6) Recently the issue of... has been brought to public attention. 7) One of the great men once said that... Now more and more people share this belief. 8) Until recently, ... ha