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Thefollowing appeared as part of an article inamagazine devoted to regional
life:
“Corporations should look to the city of Helios when seeking new business
opportunities or a new location. Even in the recent recession, Helios’s
unemployment rate was lower than the regional average. It is the industrial
center of the region, and historically ithas provided more than itsshare of the
region’s manufacturing jobs. In addition, Helios is attempting to expand its
economic base by attracting companies that focus on research and
developmentofinnovativetechnologies.”
Discusshow wellreasoned.. .etc.
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考生原文
The conclusion endorsed in this argument is that the city of Helios is a
goodplace for companies to establish a new business. To justify the claim,
the author proves several pieces of evidence. Firstly, the author points out
that Helios has a lower unemployment rate than average. In addition, the
author reasons that it is an industrial center. What’s more, the author also
assumes that Helios is also seeking companies in order to expand its
economic base. As we glance over the argument, the author’s argument is
somewhatconvincing, butfurtherreflectionrevealsthatitomitssomething
important that should be a
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